Friday, 23 March 2012

She Wears My Ring

                               she probes gently
              ah softly, wriggles elegantly
                   her little pinky winks too
and I get crazy like the caged monkey
                                             at the zoo

                        she trembles slightly
most delightful shiver in my timber
    my fingers the welcome soldiers
                        sway into her porch
               twin peaks of expectancy
     lie with truth in the driving seat

she laughs quietly, teases playfully
      she mounts over mine expertly
                               rides smoothly
while I groan helplessly, hungrily
        I say things out loud, rudely
                                 hips singing
    whip this lion into submission

            she likes crimson
                nails and roses
               fingers and toes
                biting into flesh
           her little pinky raised
                             in submission
                     moans cut me open
                       she wears my ring


Adura Ojo - March 23, 2012. All rights reserved.

27 comments :

  1. Oh my! What a sensuous poem! And you used the prompt seamlessly. Exciting images!
    Best wishes,
    Anna
    Anna's RFW-challenge No. 34 'She wears my ring'

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  2. Hot and sensuous...wonderful imagery and I liked the ending verse a lot.

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  3. Oh I love this! Fab imagery and voice.

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  4. I can't say anything that hasn't already been said :) This was marvelous Adura. Wow.

    .........dhole

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  5. Thanks: Anna, Rek, Madeleine and Donna.

    At first I thought of going into hiding for being so..., but then it's prolly better to just LOL.

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  6. Well Adura, you said it was naughty. Well, isn't it though! But was naughty ever performed so nice(ly). You are such a gifted girl!

    A little different to my 'classic' prosetry.

    Denise

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    1. Thanks Denise. I really shouldn't be encouraged on naughty posts. I might find it hard to stop. Lol.

      Yours is a prosetry classic. I loved your lines.

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  7. I like the naughty and sensual write..Cheers ~

    http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.ca/2012/03/simply-beautiful.html

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    1. Just back from yours, Heaven. Gracias. I think naughty and sensual sums up some of your beautiful poems too:)

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    1. Hey - hey, Cynthia:D
      Welcome to my blog.

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  9. OMG! Adura!!! Fantastic poem. I love it so much I'm going to share it and save it. LOL

    What more can I say? It blew my mind. Well done.

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    1. LOL. I'm learning from you, Kiru. Thanks, sista. Please share away:D

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  10. No comment...just some heavy breathing in the background.
    ;)

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  11. goodness...col shower coming up...the toe in submission...ha great touch...and this just builds...heat...

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    1. Hope it isn't cold where you are, Brian. Why else would you need the heat;)?...You guys are cracking me up, lol. Thanks though:)

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  12. Hello Adura.
    Is it me or is it suddenly on fire in here? Phew!
    I loved this so much, I had to read it twice. I love your poetic voice...this would be awesome with audio included. This is naughty done right. No more need to said. Did I tell you I LOVE this?...oh I said that already...see, you've gone & got me all hot & bothered. I'm leaving to cool off. See you soon dear friend!

    The Beloved

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    1. I'm back...I just remembered something...I'm having another collaboration of poets & non-poets. Debut opens May 15th over at my new blog, Lovers' Cove!. Hope you can join me...it's a monthly collaboration with a twist. Check out the guidelines here...

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    2. Aww...Gracias, my lovely friend. Heat, fire...it's all good, Andy.

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    3. About Lovers' Cove!, count me in. I might need a reminder closer to the time. Have a fab weekend with your beloved.

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  13. Very sensuous, very touching. Eroticism is such a pleasure to read when it comes from the heart like this poem does.

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    1. Welcome to my blog, Charles. Really appreciate the feedback. Eroticism only comes to me once in a blue moon...hope I can write more but keep it tasteful.

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  14. Hi Adura
    I'm a little late and must say this is erotic as everyone has said. Yet it is also well written and not offensive. I think you did a wonderful job.
    Nancy

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    1. Awww...thanks, Nancy. Appreciate your being here and taking the time to read and leave a comment. I know it's not been an easy time for you. So thoughtful of you to drop by.

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