Saturday, 28 April 2012

Clarity


Sky blue eyes of May
Sunrise's mating chorus
Lovers' empty nest

Ginger spiced kisses
Pavarotti on full blast
Love in the shower

©Adura Ojo

Haiku Heights: Clarity
NaPoWriMo Day 28

images: google

Some might say this clarity has a touch of smudge! lol.

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    1. Glad you think so, Pranita. Thanks.

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  2. hehe i really like the second...in the shower its clean love at least eh? smiles...clarity has a touch of smudge, i like that too...

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    1. Thanks, Brian. You cracked me up with 'Clean love...so random, lol. Glad you like 'Clarity has a touch of smudge.'

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  3. Love in the shower...I don't think I can see clearly ~

    Smiles ~

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    1. LOL.
      Grace, guess what I was thinking when I said: clarity has a touch of smudge! I suppose clarity comes with the calm afterwards* - *Here is where I'm supposed to wink ;), but some might find that creepy, I think.

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  4. 'Pavarotti on full blast Love in the shower.' Priceless image. Great as always Adura.

    Just came from your Presents blog. That header picture is so super awesome I was enchanted.

    Denise

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    1. Hi Denise. Thank you so much for your feedback. Glad you noticed my recent labour of love on AOP. I'm hoping to spend more time there once NaPoWriMo is over.

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  5. Adura....Loved all of the images you came up with to portray clarity! (And what a beautiful picture.)

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    1. Love that pic too. Had to choose between two...but in the end there was no contest.

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  6. Thanks, Mary. Wishing you a fab weekend.

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  7. Amazed by the words you have used, Good :)

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  8. My friend Adura,
    I am always amazed by your talent. No, I will not say anything about the shower (lol). Great job from a great writer.

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    1. My dear friend, I can only imagine what you would say about the shower! But that would not be clarity for me to imagine it so. Perhaps it is to be found (as it always is) in your poetry.

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  9. magical lilting and musical haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  10. Awesome! Magical shimmering of words ... nice picture too.

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  11. WoW. Create awesome clarity of thought
    and mood.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  12. A sensual collection of romantic haiku!

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  13. It sounds like spring all right (smiles). I can see it with great clarity - even through the steam, hee hee.

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